Sunday, October 23, 2011

sketch pg A new kind of poetry!

Love hurts if you can feel the pain you feel?
Can you tell me if this feeling is fake?
Maybe then my heart won't crumble like cake!
Please can someone tell me what is the deal?

Soft heart like a tomato not like steel.
This feeling makes my body sore with aches.
Pain is too strong I can not concentrate.
Love me not, this feeling is so surreal.

Surprised touch makes mouth open like a door.
When will this blood pumper learn to defend?
Fight my battle help my vision to see!
Hurray battle won today I adore.
I guess my beating chest has learned to fend.
Just leave it up to silly me to flee!

1 comment:

  1. I loved this poem.. I loved the imagery and the rhyming scheme and everything.

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